|Redo ^_^ I felt I needed to change it so I did|
RapeInnocent, walking along-
No one has any idea what her father does wrong.
Well, maybe I was lying about the innocent. She was loud
But she had to yell and scream- To seem tough and proud.
She wore a regular t-shirt and jeans
And no one had any idea what she sees; Seen.
She was beautiful; beyond pretty.
Yet she couldn't show her even more gorgeous wings- She needed to be free.
The hell she'd deal with each night-
She wanted, needed, to see the light.
Yet you let that happen to her. Why did you let that happen?
There's no such thing as misshapen.
She was raped!
She couldn't escape!
I hope you make that man fall in well.
I hope he burns in a hell ( for what he did).
|Critiques I've given people who have requested for it on some of their work... usually whenever I jus browse deviantart... cuz i got nuttin else better to so|
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UPDATE: i appologize in ADVANCE for the H0RR!BL3 quality of my pics... i use meh ipod camera all the time, so its not too great...
So since my other account, which is EhX-KoR is kinda more professional-seeming (apparently), I wanted to keep this one a lot looser... So instead, I post my drawings there, and then I'll post other stuff like photos, quotes, hilarious or controversial comments, etc.
I hope my posts will make people laugh and make them feel better when they're having a bad day, and so-on...