Thnx 4 all teh support u guys... it rlly helps
dont forget to fave and watch (not that im demanding a watch, but if u lieks my stuff, it woud rlly b nice ^_^)
RapeInnocent, walking along-
No one has any idea what her father does wrong.
Well, maybe I was lying about the innocent. She was loud
But she had to yell and scream- To seem tough and proud.
She wore a regular t-shirt and jeans
And no one had any idea what she sees; Seen.
She was beautiful; beyond pretty.
Yet she couldn't show her even more gorgeous wings- She needed to be free.
The hell she'd deal with each night-
She wanted, needed, to see the light.
Yet you let that happen to her. Why did you let that happen?
There's no such thing as misshapen.
She was raped!
She couldn't escape!
I hope you make that man fall in well.
I hope he burns in a hell ( for what he did).
|Critiques I've given people who have requested for it on some of their work... usually whenever I jus browse deviantart... cuz i got nuttin else better to so|